When your heart
Has been broken
And stepped on
It leaves you hesitant
Reluctant to try
To give in once more
To open up To emotion
To dip your toe
Into the mire
Into the ocean
Of desire
To dip your toe
Into the ocean
Of unknown emotion
If you don’t
Enter the water
You wont get wet
There is no danger
Of being dragged under
Should you take a chance?
On love again
Throw caution to the wind
Open yourself up to the pain
Or the pleasure
Feel the love
Washing over you
Immersing yourself
The waves washing over you
It may drown you
If you do
If you resist the temptation
You will be safe
Unharmed in your segregation
Yet a single moment spent
In the refreshing waters
Stood on the ocean floor
Is worth a lifetime
Spent safely on the shore
10 comments:
disagree!
beautiful poem tho :D
hey..beautiful poem d!!!...y did u write it though????
it's easy to figure out sumone's hurt u pretty bad...or u've hurt sumone badly and u r regrettin...
but who???
ada ada ada...ennama yezhudi irukka pa..pullarikkudu. orey peelings pola irukku :p
*hands togther*
Good Work!
but wat if the waters drag u down...... wat did u do abt that close frnd? coz i'm in this situation wen i hv to make my choice...... between staying safely on shore and shrinking away from the ppl who hurt u..... or give it a shot n go to them again......... I'll tellya ltr the exactly wats happening...... n temme at that time...... wat u did abt it wat i shud do..
its ok lah..life is bitter sweet..just gotto go throu it day by day..neways , u can always be bold enough to enjoy the "golden glow" of happiness and joy in it :P
a nice poem...but y do you have to take such a bizzare act tht may lead u too drown....i think if u r hurt u must just face world like u top everything..tht the hurt doesnt matter to u
its a lovely poem.... quite powerful... dunno wat else to say.... lovely really
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